Revision of Pitch

After both my generic and audience research there are vast changes to my initial pitch. Mostly I intend to fit my video more to music video conventions to fit the brief, by using techniques such as intertextuality and performance elements such as lip syncing to my video. In addition more creative shots will be used to greater effect, with more rare shot types being a music video genre convention. More than anything I learnt to guarantee that my video will pace similarly to the song.

I have developed a clearer narrative and aesthetic to compliment the techniques I previously described in order to set a tone and develop meaning. The narrative will focus on a teenage/young adult man, who is struggling internally with mental health and the overall suppression of emotion and expression due to toxic masculinity. Masculinity is a complex subject to cover within such a shot space of time, therefore I intend to utilise intertextuality to invoke meaning from the texts 'Fight Club' and 'Braveheart' by building off of the cultural competency of my viewer. I have still been inspired to have a less saturated video and to have my lead wear a dress, but also incorporate more punk/ rebellious elements to the outfit to better create depth within a character who ultimately says nothing.

Most notably I have chosen to reject Richard Dyer's 'star theory', with my lead playing a character rather than the artist themselves. This, therefore, will have to result in a stronger brand identity and digital convergence across multiple platforms, incorporating a motif across not only my video but companion websites. I have chosen to have a motif of a mask to both reflect the anonymity of my artist, but also as a metaphor for the strong exterior enforced by toxic masculinity.